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I have a good friend .Her name is English Weekly. She has a square face. On her face, there are a lot of interesting things. Do you know why I like English Weekly so much? Now, I will tell you the reason! First,she can enrich my English knowledge. Second,all the pictures on her face are pretty. Third,when I am not very happy, I will read the jokes or the cartoons, then I will be in a good mood. Oh,I like you, my friend——English Weekly.