题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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With the expedition of urbanization and the proliferation of industries, we have made great progress in the economy field. Notwithstanding, it doesn't seem to have brought about the development of communications. Faithful as we are, the lack of reliance, the decline of social moral, we gradually lose our heart and become unwilling to trust. Trust, the rudiments of communication,for which,different people gather together, contributing their time and energies, therefore,the ardours project which one person accomplish impotently can be done effectively.If it were not for trust the between people, we wouldn't have lived a peaceful life while life would have had to be full of alertness.It is because everyone is willing to trust others that our society functions better. Trust others,you show a good manner and a qualification being capable of understanding how to respect others;in return,others will also trust you,which inevitably gives you a sense of faithful and reliant.Hence,you are able to achieve your value more confidently. Our society needs trust.