小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend Jane is a pretty and cute girl. She has a pair of big and bright eyes, which seem as if they can speak. Under her small lovely nose,there is a little naughty mouth. Her hair is straight and long, hanging down to her shoulders. In one word, she is a healthy girl. She is the best student in her class. She always gets full marks in the exams. What's more, she can play the piano, and she sings and dances well. In every New Year's party,she plays the piano and sings sweet songs for her classmates. Everybody loves her very much.