小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Since the students from Shenyang University study in the self--study room, it is a disaster place to explore. It annoyed me in many ways. When I walk into the self--study room, I can always hear the weariful noise from the students, including laughing , eating sound , chatting , coughing and so on . It seem to be the moment I serious study ,there is a moble--phone ringing , even worse they should answer the phone in the room. The room is placed at the shade side ;in other words, the whole room is full of dim with little light through in , as if you were into a basement. Besides, I can hardly believe such a small room should hold more than two hundred people , and the electric fan always out of work, so that the air can't flow well. That is the reason why we were always sweeting when we were in there every time .