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2012年10月13日雅思大作文真题:如何看待社会多元化

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:38浏览次数:3140
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题目要求:

The population of the mix of people from different culture and ethnic group, why, and is it positive and negative.

题目讲解:

第一段:介绍目前多元文化的社会现象

第二段:分析原因

1 飞机和通信技术

2全球化,人口流动增加

3 移民政策的影响

第三段:negative

1 文化冲突

2 文化同化或边缘化,年轻一代的文化认同危机

第四段:positive

1 文化融合,促进经济繁荣与文明

2 促进创新与发展

第五段:结论

词汇拓展:

1.    Metropolis 大都市

2.    co-existence 共存

3.    be attributed to 归因于

4.    temporarily 暂时地

5.    permanently 长期的

6.    beyond the national border 跨越国界

7.    facilitate 使…更容易

8.    without limitation of space and time 没有时间和空间的限制

9.    mobility 流动性

10.    to be specific 具体来说

11.    involved 相关的

12.    immigrate 移民

13.    distinctive = different不同的

14.    tolerate v.容忍 tolerant adj

15.    inclusiveness 包容

16.    accommodation 容纳

17.    multi-culture 多元文化,Multiculturalism

18.    embodiment 代表

19.    melting pots 熔炉

20.    collide 冲突

21.    dominant 主导的

22.    the tendency of 倾向性

23.    assimilate 同化

24.    marginalize 边缘化

25.    identity 身份认同

26.    idealistic 理想主义的

27.    egalitarian 平等的

28.    reverse 扭转

29.    deny 否认

30.    as …as 和…一样

31.    adapt to 适应

32.    Cultural diversity 文化多元

33.    stimulate 刺激

34.    enhance 加强

35.    prosperity n.繁荣, prosper v

36.    productivity 生产力

37.    brilliant 灿烂的

38.    civilization 文明

39.    featured with 以…为特征

40.    exotic 异国的

41.    integration 融合

42.    widen their horizon 扩大视野

43.    accelerate 加速

44.    keep pace with 保持步调

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评语:

文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用学术词汇,作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。

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Talents are frequently moving from one place to another. It can be positive to the host country's development. China's prosperous economy is favorable for foreign investments and talents. Investments like Walmart and Mcdonald's not only means employment and tax income, but also new commercial and management model. Along with the investment are foreign employees, they add to the labor forces and contribute to this country's economy. China's charming landscape and unique culture has also attracted a lot of internationals. They come to China to study Chinese or kongfu, or opera. Meanwhile, they introduce some advanced culture into our society as well. Thus could affect native people to give up some out-dated habits in some way and to be more connected with the outside world. They actually serve as ambassadors to get the other nations to know about China which are more effective because seeing is believing. Role model in this regard is Dashan, a Canadian who are interested in Chinese culture, after years of hard working in China, he finally serves as a well-known culture ambassador between the two countries. So, I think foreigners is important both economically and culturally.

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