高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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How time flies! it is 27 years that i left my hometown for studying abroad. To my big surprise, it has changed a lot even i can't believe that it is the one as i was a child. when i was little, it was the most beautiful place i have not ever seen before . trees were everywhere you could see and a long river which was so clean that you could see fished clearly ran through it . except that the local lived in old houses were in a poor situation. but now inversely, there are many industrial factories along the road on which lots of cars drive. on one side ,it brings job opportunities for the people there then it solves social problems . on the other side ,But the air ,water pollution makes the environment getting serious. the fishes die from the poisonous water... so what should we do now is to improve the environment .