2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；全文结构较为严谨；文中从句数量稍显不足，注意个别有错误的句子；请注意分段。

As we all know,computer plays an important role in our daily life and almost everyone need to touch computer in the future.We can easily find the advantages and disadvantages of the computer in the everyday life.first of all,we can go shopping on the Internet without spending a lot of time on the wandering on the streets,and many goods are cheaper.Second,we can search the useful knowledge on the Internet to help our study.However,there are also some bad effects about the computers,some teenagers just play the computer games day and night,they lost their study and live a unhealthy life.So,we should see the computer correctly and maintain ourselves not admitted in the computers.