高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；请注意分段。

Today, i introduce my hometown, in the past,which i was born and living. in my childhood, my hometown was around by trees,fish were playing in the clear river; the houses were poor and the streets were narrow;people cultivated diligent but the live was always poor. however, the buildings and industries here and there; no matter the car or vehicles run in the street; although the industry developed rapidly,which cause environment pollution.as the developing of society, the trees were decreased and the fish were disappointed, so it must be cope with the pollution.