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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11033
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
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My favorite sport People in the world love to play sports, not only because it can relax ourselves, but also can exercise our bodies. My favorite sport is playing football. I start this favorite only by chance. One day when I was just at the way home, I got a football near the road, and then I started playing football with my friends and I can't stop it. Then life with a full love with football began. Later I join the school team because of my love with it, so I often practice playing football with both classmates and friends, or sometimes even with my P.E. teacher, so my football skills improved very fast. My favorite football player is Backham from England, he can play football very well. And my dream is to be a professional football player as well as him! I hope it will come ture.

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