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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17600
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分58.5分
评语:

句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;文章词汇不够丰富,但单词拼写要认真检查;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

you need to think twice or thrice before you make a decision. so. i don't think snap judgments can be trusted. when i make a decision or a judgement, i need others opinions. combining others thoughts is an important steps before i make a judgment. i remember that one time i made a judgment without thinkfully ,i even thought i was well down in that thing. but when i was satisified with the decision i made, my friend told me that i totally misunderstood what my teacher wanted us to do. it was so embarrassing.after that ,i never make snap judgments again.

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