小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have three good friend, one is in my hometown, he is a engineer working in goverment's house property survey department. he have got married at 2012, he has a beautiful apartment, a beautiful wife, and a nice car. he is happy, I think~ another one work in shenyang, the capital city of my province. and he is a engineer as well, but in different industry, which I am not familiar with, kind like building dam or something. he earned more money than the first one, he bought a apartment in shenyang, but his wife is working in dalian. they will meet each other twice a week.