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Nowadays,it already has not been a new phenomenon for development of distance education and modern streaming media technique will be a good tool for this.However, it still sparks bitter controversy among the whole society. It ia undeniable that modern education can provide much more equal rights for students receive knowledge.That is to say, students coming from remote ares also have the same right to learn and interactive with professors by computers.Furthermore, this teaching method is convenient for students.For example, students can operate the speed of teaching accord to their levels rather than obey the teachers' arrangements. Yet there is still a dark side in this picture.Due to lack of supervision and consciousness, students may only consider how to finish this course in a high speed rather than concentrate in listening.In addition, the meaning of education is not only imparting knowledge but also clutivating students' social responsibility and relationship,but,which is cannot be given by education distance. Personally, my view is that though there are several shortages, education distance, as a result of development of modern technology,is benefical many people,especially for some people who have not admitted to the University but realise the importance of knowledge.Therefore, we should hold an enlightened attitude for this rather than repudiate.