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作者词汇基础不错，在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；请注意分段。
When asked about a theme,different ways can contribute to developing our ability to deal with problems and be happy,but the following ones may be most effective. First of all, no matter what we do,everything that we expect will become better with good mood. Another way to solve the problem of happiness is that keeping an optimistic attitude towards life.Let us take a inventor,Edison, for example who once made great contribution to our country.When he was young,suffering serious disease.Despite this,never did he give up his dream and managed all kinds of ways to invent the light which is widely used all parts of the world.So there is no denying that he was indeed an outstanding inventor.Furthermore,the reason why he was so successful is that he remains optimistic attitude anytime.Eventually, as a proverb goes that,"a man who is contented with everything,he will be always happy." I firmly take it for granted that this is absolutely right and true theory.Just like some businessmen who devoted all his lifetime earning much money,but for some reasons,they were unable to enjoy it long time except regretting. It is conceivable that the attitude has a great influence on us.Without having it,how can we become delightful.
