高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometownf beforetime:flowers and grass around here;fishes in clean river piayed;house was build easily;street was crowded;people life was poor.now:tall house has build;many diffent cars drive in the street;life develop quickly but environment become more and more serious; trees has cutted down ,fishes has disappeared;so manage environment pollution is very important.