一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Upset,dissapointed,I don't know how to describe this feelings.I met somebody unhonest .Was I too stupid?I don't like to tell others what was I doing until I was successful.Before that I did not care they treated me as a fail.Now I was confused again.I wonder it is suitable for me to be a translater?Was my English good engouh?Now I lose my heart again.While thinking of my grandparent ,I just can not help feelinemg guilty for what I once did.At this moment,I was listening music with a bad mood.Money,all my eyes is only money.