高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；连词使用偏少。

My favorite sport My name is XX.Playing football is my favorite sport. I fell in love with football by chance.One day, I picked up a football on my way home.Then I started playing it with my friends.From then on,it became my favorite sport.And I often play it and have a competition with my friends. Bake harm is my favorite sporta star.And my best dream is to be a soccer player.