高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；连词使用偏少。

My favorite sport My name is XX.Playing football is my favorite sport. I fell in love with football at the first time.One day, I picked up a football on my way home.Then I started playing it with my friends.From then on,it became my favorite sport.And I often play it and have a competition with my friends. Bake harm is my favorite sporta star.And my best dream is to be a soccer player.