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2014高考英语作文预测集中训练8:环保的重要性

发布时间:2014-06-06 17:48浏览次数:1005
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请阅读以下的短文,然后根据提供的任务说明和写作要求,写一篇150字左右的英语短文。
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Almost everyone knows that water covers three-fourths of the earth’s surface .Most of it ,however ,is in the oceans and is too salty to drink . Also ,some of it is frozen and cannot be used . In fact ,less than one percent is left for the use of people ,animals and plant life.
All through history men have tried to build their homes near the sources of fresh water .Now fresh water is becoming scarce ,but more and more is needed because of the increasing number of people in the world .Some industries also use large amounts of fresh water in the production of things such as steel ,petroleum ,paper and rubber and so on.
Scientists estimate that the need for fresh water will have doubled by the year 2003. If they are correct ,we must find new ways of saving it or producing it. Some nations have worked on the problem and are already sharing their information with others. They are trying to keep their rivers from becoming polluted .Deep wells are also being dug ,and rain water is being collected in huge artificial lakes .In one way or another ,they hope to provide enough water to satisfy the needs of their people. 
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文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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As we know,water is very important for us.when we wash our hands,drink and take a shower,water is being used. the saying goes:"water is the origin of life."that's right.if there isn't much water on the earth,there isn't life and there isn't humanbing."water,not only my father,but also our father."Marks said. therefore,we should protect water which we need without responsibility.that's all

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