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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
The way of happiness Happiness means different things for different person. For me, happiness is the ability to deal with problems. Sometimes, we are not happy because of problems around us, such as lack of money, lose job, lover leaving and so on. The best way to be happy is to deal with them. Some people say that when you are in trouble, you have to make it up yourself because no one is coming. However, I think we have to be strong, but not always. As long as we can deal with those problems, you'll be happy again. If you go to your friends that who can help, then call them. Once the problems are settled, you'll feel the sky is blue, the grass is green again. That's happiness. Happiness does not mean no trouble or problem. You'll feel happier when you fix them up. Do not be afraid of problems, face them and beat them. Something can not kill you makes you stronger. When you are in trouble, you may feel frustrated. It's OK. Do not push yourself so hard. No one can avoid problems. Try your best to deal with them. At last, you'll gain experience and find that happiness is always with you.
