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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Education pays In the picture,we can see that the increasing of pay is based on the degree.It is apparent that the bachelor's degree has more than the associate degree,which we are sure that the degree can acquire someone that has it the high-pay job.However,we have a degree that will give us a prefect future?On the one hand,employers fucus on the capacility that can bring the big futune instead of our degrees.On the other hand,our university cultivate the habit that we can study all our life and have living skills.As above of all,this is valuble that we have ability and good habits.
