2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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welcome to qingdao Hellow every welcome to the city of qingdao which is my beautiful hometown. There are lots of beautiful sightes and proper climate,so you can enjoy yourself. At first,we go to gold beach to see big sea,you could feel the wind together with you partner.Next we go to xiao qindao ,you can see all sights in there.finally,we go to zhanqiao which is historic. As far as I,m concerned,I favorite place is gold beach which is good place to go holiday.