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考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:18浏览次数:3135
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写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。

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300字以内。

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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

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computer has exerted gigantic influence upon human's life, which resolves some indicate and accurate problem. some people begin to afraid that computer with excellent intelligence ,someday, may replace human function in society and mankind is prone to stop evolving. due to the boundary between computer and human, such worry may be a bit unnecessary. firstly, computer is designed ,following every step that we have devised, so that it is incapable of decision. provide the unexpected situation takes place, computer barely flexibly adjust to the state while human definitely creates new approaches to confront the obstacle by analyzing and accumulating information. for example, it is universal that computer applys to medical domain, but it can never substitute of doctor completely. in terms of computer, doctors detect the health problem that we can't discover by our eyes and do minimally invasion. remedies, however, mostly rest on judgement of doctors who are on the base of each patient's different situations. in addition, the various unique emotions, such as frustration, happiness, grief and so forth, is endowing with mankind distinctive feature compare with a computer. because of kaleidoscopic emotional world , our soul and literature tend to be distinguished, which computer scarcely catches up with. to sum up, although the functon of computer is advanced by leaps and bounds, we should take fully confidence to believe that human dominates the great world.

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