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考研作文:关于领导

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:22浏览次数:2754
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题目要求:

什么是领导?领导应具备什么品质?

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300字左右。

用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

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Leaders are the rules sometimes but never be a friend .Good ones will teach you in day time work .And may guide you the right way with patience .Young people always want to come across the kind ones under the burdon of lacking experience .That is the qualified leader and the most welcomed between colleagues . Direct leaders is the one that we touch much every day . whatever things we should share with them first .More times they would like to help youngers and freshman .The wise leaders may help computer gain much benefit ,but i think the wise and kind are more important .for the development of a company .

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