2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

On excessive packing With the development of economic,There are so many people are attention the quality of goods,likewise,they also are concerned with the packing.This phenomena become more and more popular among people. So,why this problem become series.The reasons can be listed as follows.First,the goods is more exquisite packaging, they feel more satisfied.Only in this way,can they fell not lost their face.Second,With the improvement of life quality，people are keen to enjoy good stuff. the excessive packing is mean to waste more resources,it is no need to do this.Don't let this trend spread。