2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

On excessive packing With the development of economy, people start to pay attention to the quality of goods,likewise,they also are concerned with the packaging.This phenomena become more and more popular among people. So,why this problem become series.The reasons can be listed as follows.First,the goods are more exquisite packaging, they feel more satisfied.Only in this way,can they fell not lost their face.Second,With the improvement of life quality，people like to enjoy good stuff. The excessive packaging mean to waste unnecessary resources,it is no need to do this.Don't let this trend spread。