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It is a common view that human beings around the world totally changed the living status of bios in this planet. From the first moment human was born, the natural resource was exploited and ruined consistently, to satisfy people for whatever kinds of purposes, like cut trees down for cooking earlier and building later, or catch and kill animal for avoiding from suffering the hungry. Human has already walked so far in the way of destroying the environment that it is hard to go back , however , it doesn't meat it is impossible. Nowadays, we can find that the damage of the eco-environment involving the plants and animal species from the human being are incredibly serious and heavy, what is more , the negative influence between bios can interact and tend to the worse situation. Take Panda in China for example, a famous cute but few quantity animal which feeds on bamboo, died suddenly in a few years because the invasion of the human's city make the square of the bamboo shrank tremendously and cut down the Panda's food origin. Unfortunately，the death of Panda had not attract people's attention at first, people thought that it is impossible to enlarge the amount of the Panda, so the deforestation of bamboo was more crazy and put the Panda into an more dangerous condition. However, all of these problems can be figured out when people made a decision to fight it for the balance of the eco-environment. In fact, only if people would like to solve the environmental problem, they can do it. There are many strategies, like legislation for protecting the danger animal and plants, take severe punishment against the illegal activities, or even build special protection zone for particular bios. The effect of such measures , undoubtedly, has been proved by many countries and districts，the protection for Panda is an successful example. The number of Panda ,once, has been less than 1000, therefore, the China government took series of effective measures involving the establishment of Panda protection base, which indeed contributed to the increase in the Panda quantity. Even such difficulty and seemly impossible stuff are completed, there will not anything else fail. Overall, my opinion is that the people have responsible and ability to handle and change the passive effect on the bios, therefore, I think that it is time for the human start to take activities immediately to protect the eco-environment.
