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There always a lot of people just draw a conclusion depend on what they heard from others or what they saw in their daily life,but,is it a right behavior? As we all know ,we should think twice before we do something,it is also apply to getting a reasonable conclusion.First,we can't come into our view just from other's comment at once.We should know the authentic conditions, and we can think in our head for seconds,don't hurry to get a conclusion.Second,we often say seeing is believing,however,there always some misunderstandings be seen by our eyes.So,if you just come to a conclusion by what you saw,it may be wrong sometimes. In a word,we should think carefully before we get a conclusion and depend on the facts,this can be seen as a reasonable behavior.
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