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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
I am glard to tell you that we are very thanks for you bought 100 shirts from us.I have some suggestions for them move .I think we can use boxes with paper ,ithink it good for shirts ,not a long ago we have a chance with other contry we used box of paper and they think it is a good way for move. I hope you latter very much .
