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Who is my best friend? I think of that question on my own. Here I want to share some information about my good friend with you. the dairy .My good friend, is witted down all kinds of odds and ends when i feel sad or happy. In other words,He won't let me feel confused and amassed , certainly,I feel so excited owning that friend.