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文章学术词汇使用贫乏，单词拼写做的不错；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
In my life, I have faced, even will face, the different kinds of difficulties at any time. Always, I am considered to be a loser .However, failure is inevitable, it gives me wisdom that I will need to succeed in the future. Last semester I worked in a restaurant in my spare time. At the beginning, it was extremely hard for me to learn the rules and remember the recipes. I had to stand there and smile. At the end of the day, I was so tired that I almost could do nothing. After a few days of working, the head waiter told me that I could take charge as a chief. I was glad to do that. For me, a green hand, it was not an easy thing to serve all customers well. Sometimes I dished up wrongly, or I forgot the customers’ requirements. What’s worse, I overturned the plates twice. However, I would not be defeated by these difficulties. One day, I was about to be off duty when a foreigner came here. Because other colleges could not speak English well, so I was the only one here who could speak English, which meant that I had to stay to serve him. It was my first time to talk with a foreigner out of class. I was glad to have such a chance to practice my spoken English, and I believed it was not a big deal and I could handle it .However, suddenly, my mind was blank even though I had memorized 5000 English words. But at that time, I was worried about it and I was afraid that what to do next. How could I speak to him? I began to speak slowly, and thought how to put it correctly at the same time. “Good evening. What can I do for you?” I said it word by word and thought about whether I expressed it rightly, could they understand me and would they laugh at my pronunciation? At the same time, I showed them the menu. “Here is the menu, Are you ready to order now?” I asked ,and told myself “Take it easy.” when I prepare to set down. “Let me see, ok, I order... with some rice.” the foreigner said so fast that I was confused. “Pardon？”I asked with embarrassment and I was ashamed of myself. “Oh，we want tomatoes and eggs. Look at these ‘xi hong shi chao ji dan ’”He showed me a note with some Chinese characters and he said clearly so that I could catch his meaning. It surprised me that he could speak Chinese. “Do you want to have something else? ”, I asked and write that on the paper. “Well, ma po dou fu and tang cu li yu are ok……that’s all.. Please quickly and I am ready to pig out on it. “He added. “ What would you like to drink, please?”I said that out of polite. “ Green tea.” He said to me, acting like a gentleman. At that moment, I did not feel nervous any more, even I didn’t pay much attention, if anything, I was confident once again. “Please wait a moment. Just a moment. Just a minute.” I smiled and returned to kitchen to tell the head cook menu. After ten minutes, I served him again. “Sorry to have kept you waiting so long.” I placed the food on the table, and came back to counter. Eventually, I relaxed myself and carried on my job, while my step became less heavily than before. After half an hour, he called me and pointed these empty dishes, “how much?”. “The total is 50 Yuan. Here is your check, sir.”I took this to him. “Here you are, your food tastes good.” “Thank you. Come again next time, you are Welcome.” “Bye.” When he left, I took a long breath, and the head waiter came to me and said with a delighted smile, “Your English is pretty good. Good job.” “Thanks a lot” He pated my back, then went further. However, I stood still, while my heart was beating so fast that it couldn’t calm down. Until now, I cannot believe that I make it and succeed. Now, I know the road to success is wind, and full of failures. While one also can achieve himself if he really wants to, just like me. It is based on endeavor and confidence. Never give up! It’s only when you give up that you really fail. I think one day we’ll all conquer our shortcoming and be the number one.
