小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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My Dog My dog's name is dudu.it is very lovely.although it does sports everyday,it even fat.he likes to eat food.for example,all kinds of meats,fruits and vegertables.but its best favorite is meats.it eats two piece of pork everyday.it is a clever and brave dog.on suday last week.a thief want to steal an old women's bag.it catched the thief as soon as it can.I love my dog very much!