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作者词汇量积累不错，学术词汇积累较少；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
I, at the most of the time, will face the scene that our students run or walk on the playground at the night. Most of them will be in one person group or several people group, laughing and talking. As for me, I am the one of them. Usually I study late at the night, and then will exercise regularly. Taken these ways we do exercise include not only being outdoors but staying at home. Some exercises we choose like hipping, climbing mountains, especially running on the playground is the favorite sport. Why do our students choose to run on the playground? There are few reasons we will keep eye on. I cannot deny that probably they just want to attract other boys’ eyes, or to be skinny, and the most important of all, the good health is the basic need when we should do the hard working. The one kind of students, who are wearing the nice clothes, wants to be the center of the crowed. Our students, including boys and girls, want to attract other’s attention when they are running on the campus. In the daily life, people are always in a certain circle that they have the fat chance to communicate with others. Therefore, they consider that stage where maybe they can develop a romantic relationship. Running in the morning or at the night, our students will hold that opportunity to talk to others whom they more like to be close to. Therefore, when they happen to meet the person forthwith, they will thank themselves for which they do exercise at that moment in this area without giving up being running. Another kind of students wants to be skinny. Many of them choose to work out at night from 9:00 to 10:00. Ignoring the uncomfortable feelings from the skinny people, and stopping thinking they are fat and not wearing the beautiful clothes, they just need to do it from now on to exercise regularly with the strong faith. The more time they use to do exercise, the better feature they will become. To be skinny, beautiful, can fit in the beautiful clothes, these are the simple and acceptable reasons to answer why they keep exercising every day. The last part of students just wants to keep healthy. The time when they are running could make them relax and feel comfortable and they have nothing to do just keep running. If someone is under the pressure, he mostly needs to do exercise and the good healthy body will make someone who do their business work harder and harder, and everything will become better and better. Certainly, that is another reason why they prefer to work out regularly. Do not be lazy any longer and our students need to go out even just stretch the bodies and breathe the fresh air. If it is not much enough, we need do more exercise. No matter what the purposes we choose to keep running, just does it. Meanwhile, exercising everyday is good for our health, and we should keep doing.
