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As time goes by, it is easy to see that in our daily life more and more people use the smartphones instead of cellphones, especially, among the young people. Compared with the cellphone, the smartphone is more attractive and useful. A pretty appearance always can catch our attention, for instance, a beautiful smartphone. As the member of the young people, I believe that most of us are eager to be the only one. Therefore, it is no doubt that choosing a smartphone is a good choice. It is useful for us to possess the smartphone. Meanwhile the smartphone is, as it were, a walking dictionary. Last year, I went to the museum to borrow some books. When I got off the bus, there was a crossing in front of me. I had no idea which one was the right direction. Suddenly, it occurred to me that I was able to use my phone to know where I should go. With my smartphone,I contend that there is no need doing extra work. Meanwhile, wherever we need, the smartphone can let us surf the internet, listen to music and snap photos. Sending the email and making a call have made smartphones invaluable for many people. The smartphone has played an important role in my life on account of good design and practicability.
