高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；如若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇。

My favorite hobby is playing football.I fell into this by chance completely. Once I have picked up a football that nobody wanted on my half way home .I was so excited,then I called my friends to play with me together,We had a wouderful time and after that I fell in love with football very deeply. I was training with my classmates together,we also was participating in the football match together. My favorite football superstar is Beckham from England,my greatest ambition is in the near future I could become a professional football player like him.