新课标八年级单元测试写作：我的理想

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my dreamhello everyone! it is my great pleasure to share my dream with you today.my dream is to become a teacher.you know being a teacher is a thing that is very valuable and very interesting. i suggest that it must be a great fun to be with children all the day. and if i am a teacher, i can teach my students a lot of knowledge. they might become stronger and cleverer because of me. that is a very contented feeling.china is a developing country. chinese are not that excellent in their intellegent. so teachers in china might be very very important. they can provide the society with a lot of successful people, and make china a better place.do you think that i have a good dream？ i will work hard to make my dream become true!thanks~.Everyone.