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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
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What is depicted vividly in the above drawing is that a bottle of milk fell to the ground and two men stand beside it.The performance of one of them is very pessimistic.On the contrast,another is great optimistic.The drawing gives us a profound and lasting meaning. The picture shows that if we meet frustrations in life,work and study,different people have different attitude.People who is great optimistic can find advantages.On the contrary,people cannot who is very pessimistic.In short,the success or failure can be decided by attitude of one. On the basis of my observations,we should learn something from the optimistic person instead of the pessimistic person.whatever difficulties that we meet in life cannot decrease our confidence.Only in this way can we achieve success.
