新课标八年级单元测试写作：我的理想

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Today i will talk about my dream.everyone has a dream, inchuding me Building a school and to be the headmaster is my dream. In the school,there are plenty of grass and trees.there also has the dormitories(宿舍),a piayground,a dining hall and a library.if this school just like others ,it will not be meaningful,to your surprise, each grade only has one class,you can choose any class you like ,you can even not go to school.but you must get the mark which i require,unless you may be leave the school. in the dormitory, there are no bells,if you want to get up late, don not be worried about no one will punish you. you can ride a horse to go to school,the teacher will watch films to wait you.whenever you have problem, you can ffind me to help you ,i will try my best. if school life just this, it must be boring.i wll organize my student to go to many places of interest in our city or go to the theatre to watch the latest film. i hope all my students will be happy in my school ,not like a robot. i think it is not mark which you achieve but skill which you learn that count(我认为重要不是你得到的分数二是你学会的技能) because it is so crazy that there is no possibility(可能性) that(引导同谓语从句) comes true,it only mt dream in my heart that`s all. thank you!