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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；可将文中部分短句合并为长句，注意文中句子错误；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
This is a good cotoon which is a good lesson too. The key contain is a lied bottom. And there are two man in it. The left cring man said that allthing is over. The other smiling man said that:" There are still something fortunately." The whole picture is very simple, but the lesson is profound. When some unexpected thing or unfortunate thing happen to us, some persons only stare at the unbenefited, otherwise other persons always can find that what can be helpful. Generally, if the difficulties meets the one who can find out the way to resolve thing, then they will be smaller than they really were, on verse they will be get more bigger. I appreat the former style person, and I will like to be one.
