小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；连词使用偏少。

GOOD FRIRND my friend name is Amy,she is very beauty she is 13 old.she like play sports . she never go to school late . she family have herself ，parent，little boy。 father cookes food for their family in the morning。 she usually go to shopping. she has a pair of big eye，black straight hair and fair skin . I love she，Amy.because she is king ，lovely girl I get along with Amy is very pleasant