2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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i am glad to hear that you will visit my hometown .then i will introduce my beautiful hometown to you .so ,i will take you to the most place called the chongwu ancient wall.it is a attrative place .it has a long history and it also is the wisdom of the people and the sweat of the people .what is more ,it surrounds many beautiful sceneries,such as the sea ,the beach , the green trees..and so on.i think you must enjoy them .you had better come and see it by yourself ..