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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(25):高考后的暑期安排

发布时间:2014-03-27 17:16浏览次数:547
要求:

假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry最近来信,询问你高考后的暑期安排。请你根据以下要点,用英语回一封信,说明你的计划,并简述理由。
1.休息;2.读书;3.陪伴父母;4.参加社会活动。
注意:

1.词数100左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数);
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.参考词汇:
高考——college entrance examination
社会活动——social activities
Dear Henry.
I’m glad to receive you letter.
 
 Best wishes!
Li Hua

用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Dear Henry, I'm glad to receive your letter. I'd like to tell you my summer holiday plan after the college entrance examination. At the beginning of the vacation, I will have a rest . Preparing for the college entrance examination is too tired and it's essential for me to have a complete rest. During the holiday, I'd like to do some reading. Reading is important for a person's whole life. Accompanying my parents is extremely important too. During the last several years, I haven't got the time to stay with them , talk with them. Finally, I'll take part in some social activities ,summer holiday is a good time for me to improve my social ability and it's also useful for the life afterwards. This is my plan and what are you going to do ? I'm looking forward to hearing from you . Best wishes! Li Hua

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