2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；采用了一些简单的从句；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

Nowedays, with technology development fast,the phone is very important in our daily life. we can use it call someone,play game and talk with friend with it. Most people can't put it on the bag,always take it hands even walk. It is very dengours. According the picture,people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.It is not safe.