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题目要求：
The population of the mix of people from different culture and ethnic group, why, and is it positive and negative.
题目讲解：
第一段：介绍目前多元文化的社会现象
第二段：分析原因
1 飞机和通信技术
2全球化，人口流动增加
3 移民政策的影响
第三段：negative
1 文化冲突
2 文化同化或边缘化，年轻一代的文化认同危机
第四段：positive
1 文化融合，促进经济繁荣与文明
2 促进创新与发展
第五段：结论
词汇拓展：
1. Metropolis 大都市
2. co-existence 共存
3. be attributed to 归因于
4. temporarily 暂时地
5. permanently 长期的
6. beyond the national border 跨越国界
7. facilitate 使…更容易
8. without limitation of space and time 没有时间和空间的限制
9. mobility 流动性
10. to be specific 具体来说
11. involved 相关的
12. immigrate 移民
13. distinctive = different不同的
14. tolerate v.容忍 tolerant adj
15. inclusiveness 包容
16. accommodation 容纳
17. multi-culture 多元文化，Multiculturalism
18. embodiment 代表
19. melting pots 熔炉
20. collide 冲突
21. dominant 主导的
22. the tendency of 倾向性
23. assimilate 同化
24. marginalize 边缘化
25. identity 身份认同
26. idealistic 理想主义的
27. egalitarian 平等的
28. reverse 扭转
29. deny 否认
30. as …as 和…一样
31. adapt to 适应
32. Cultural diversity 文化多元
33. stimulate 刺激
34. enhance 加强
35. prosperity n.繁荣, prosper v
36. productivity 生产力
37. brilliant 灿烂的
38. civilization 文明
39. featured with 以…为特征
40. exotic 异国的
41. integration 融合
42. widen their horizon 扩大视野
43. accelerate 加速
44. keep pace with 保持步调
文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。
In many metropolises around the world, especially in English speaking countries, it is not surprising to see people from different ethnics or cultures living and working together. How this comes into existence and what influence this exerts on our society will be discussed as follow? Such co-existence of races in many major cities can largely be attributed to modern transportation and telecommunication technologies, to be specific, airplanes， computer and the internet. This advancement increases mobility of human and promotes communication and interaction between people without limitation of space and time. The earliest and most obvious representation lies in the globalization of trade and business which expand beyond the national border and facilitate people involved to immigrate permanently or live overseas temporarily. Some countries like USA or Australia have tradition of immigration and they welcome distinctive cultures and ethnics or at least they tolerate differences well. In these places, multi-culture is the embodiment of a high level of civilization.
