2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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dear friend,I am so espect than you will go my hometown to see some beautiful place. You can know China is a amaze place ,it has conved 5000 years histories It has some old place,like The Grate Wall,In our china has a world no reach The Great wall It's not a hero.Surely i will take you to a place than you will love it ,it's a put all kinds delicious food,so ,i hope you can as soon as quick to come here , I am so espect to your coming