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字数:300 满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;请注意分段。
Nowadays,with the rapid development of people's life,the economic is becoming more important as the way of how to save money.As far as I am concerned ,like collect coupons,look for group-buy,wait for sales are good ways. Take myself for example, last summer,I bought a coat which is worn in spring,so it is convenient to buy it in summer.