高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown my hometown have changed a lot in the past several years. at the past, there are so many beautiful green trees in my hometown.there are also my active fish swimming in the water.but now,the trees and the fish is disappearing.the development of industry led environment worse and worse.it is very important that stop the pollution.however, these development also made our life more comfortable.the house in my hometown is low and narrow,the life is poor before.now the tall building appeared everywhere,the cars driven on the road.these are some changes in my hometown.