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字数：300 满分：100分
作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。
Be Careful with our Pocket Money As we all know, many students have pocket money. However,they can't put it into good use. They always waste a lot of money on something without any usility. Thus, collecting money in our daily life is necessary. Given money by our parents, we don't know the importance of it. We always buy things that are trivial for us. In this way , we must set up a plan to put it into good use.For example , when we are hanging out,we don't have to follow our friends to buy the things that we don't need it at all ; when we want to read books ,we can borrow them from libraries instead of buying them. I f we do like what I said before, we can save a lot of money to do whatever we like.
