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As we all known,most of the people are always costumed to getting a conclusion after they hear or listen something.However,it is not wise for us to do this. There are some reasons accounting for this phenomenon.To begin with,we can't believe that what we see or listen is all.Then,many people usually consider something happened subjectively without connected with the truth. Therefore,in my opinion,it is necessary for us everyone to think carefully when we face something unbelievable or difficult.Only by doing this can we make a wise decision when we meet something.
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