文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
As we all know,most of the people are always costumed to getting a conclusion after they see or hear something.However,it is unwise. There are some reasons accounting for this phenomenon.To begin with,we can't believe that what we see or listen is all.Then,many people usually consider something happened subjectively without connected with the truth. Therefore,it is necessary for everyone to think carefully when we face something unbelievable or difficult.Only by doing this can we make a wise decision when we meet something.
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