文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
As we all know,most of the people are always costumed to getting a conclusion after they see or hear something.However,this action is not wise and easily misunderstanding. There are some reasons accounting for this phenomenon.To begin with,we can't believe that what we see or listen is all.Then,many people usually consider something happened subjectively without connected with the truth. Therefore,it is necessary for everyone to think carefully when we face something unbelievable or difficult.Also,talking with others about what you see or hear is agood idea.Only by doing this can we make a wise decision when we meet something.
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